November 20, 2019 Colleen’s Weeky Tanka Poetry Challenge Photo Prompt, a Haiku Traci Kenworth photo prompt Mouth Agape Traci Kenworth A glory divine raw awakening, birds streak canyon opening Share this:FacebookTwitterPrintEmailPinterestPocketTumblrLike this:Like Loading...
This is a perfect Haiku, Traci. You captured the essence of the image perfectly. ❤ LikeLiked by 1 person Reply
This time, I used your suggestion of looking at the pic and writing down what came to mind. I still tried to frame it like I’d seen on the other website, setting, subject & action (2 lines) and then reverse it also as I learned. Thank you! LikeLiked by 1 person Reply
What a difference! And yes, one of the best tests is to be able to read your poem forward and backward. I’m so proud of your efforts. ❤️ LikeLiked by 1 person
A lovely haiku, Traci! I like how you mentioned the canyon instead of the obvious sunrise/set. Brilliant! ❤ LikeLiked by 1 person Reply
This is a perfect Haiku, Traci. You captured the essence of the image perfectly. ❤
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This time, I used your suggestion of looking at the pic and writing down what came to mind. I still tried to frame it like I’d seen on the other website, setting, subject & action (2 lines) and then reverse it also as I learned. Thank you!
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What a difference! And yes, one of the best tests is to be able to read your poem forward and backward. I’m so proud of your efforts. ❤️
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I’m feeling encouraged as well. Thank you!
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Thank you again!
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A lovely haiku, Traci! I like how you mentioned the canyon instead of the obvious sunrise/set. Brilliant! ❤
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Thank you, Vashti!
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