Seven Links 10/5/19
Traci Kenworth
Writing:
1. https://killzoneblog.com/2019/09/rookie-mistakes-indie-writers-make.html โSometimes itโs hard to believe that the Kindle made itโs appearance nearly twelve years ago. It ushered in the greatest boon to writers since Gutenbergโindependent publishing. Not only did this sea change give new writers a way to get their work out to the world instantly; it also saved the careers of many midlist writers who were let go by their publishers due to lack of sales.
In those heady, early years a veritable Sargasso of sloppy mistakes were made by over-anxious newbies. Everything from lousy formatting to horrific covers (โBut my daughter designed the cover for me, and by golly, Iโm going to use it!โ)
As the years rolled on, and blogs and books on indie publishing proliferated, quality issues slowly improved. That still did not guarantee huge sales numbers. You still had to write a good book! But weโve now reached a point in indie publishing that I would call the โmature phase.โ
Still, however, rookie mistakes are made by new writers. Iโd like to point out three, and then turn the conversation over to you.โ
2. https://megdowell.com/2019/09/28/12-keys-to-successfully-returning-from-a-writing-hiatus/ โ1. Remind yourself why you started writing in the first place and why you took a break. Ask yourself why youโre ready to return and how to know when it will be time to take another hiatus in the future.
2. Choose one project you want to start working on when you get back. You donโt want to overwhelm yourself with too many possibilities, especially if youโre not even close to starting yet.
3. Set a return date. Instead of saying โIโll start writing again next week,โ pick a date that you can mark on your calendar. That is your first day back โin the office.โ Stick to it.
4. On that date, show up and write. You can show up in your sweatpants. You can show up with messy hair. You can show up with an incomplete idea. You can show up uncertain. All that matters is that you show up.โ
3. https://www.booksandsuch.com/blog/botched-communication/ โI want to tell you about an incident at a writersโ conference that was sort of heartbreaking for me. We agents have a lot invested in these conferences, just like the writers do, and sometimes we have disappointments too.
I met with a writer who pitched me a couple of projects. She seemed like someone whose writing was progressing toward possibly ready for publication. I particularly liked one of her projects, and didnโt see as much potential for the other, and I told her so. But I said Iโd love to hear from her after the conference, would love her to send me the manuscript so I could read it, and we could discuss the possibility of representation.
The last morning of the conference, she found me and told me that sheโd had another agent meeting, the agent had offered representation, and sheโd accepted. She said that Iโd been her first choice as an agent (although she may have been being kind) but based on the fact that Iโd spoken to her about a โone-book contract,โ sheโd said yes to the other agent who was interested in representing all of her work.
She said (and Iโm paraphrasing), โI donโt want an agent to represent just one project, I really want an agent who is interested in representing me as an author. Since you only talked about a single book, I went ahead and accepted representation from the other agent.โ
4. https://www.livewritethrive.com/2019/09/30/10807/ โThe protagonistโs transformational journey is highlighted in countless stories, whether novels, movies, or plays. If you take time to examine some of your favorite stories, you should be able to identify key scenes or moments in which this transformation gradually takes place. Itโs the events that transpire that erode the persona and emphasize to the character that living in that identity isnโt working.
People donโt change overnight; itโs a process. And when we write a story, we want that process to be believable. While there are six stages in the process, you might have a dozen or more scenes in which your characterโs beliefs, opinions, and biases are challenged, one bit at a time.โ
5. https://killzoneblog.com/2019/09/toxic-romance.html โMy mother-in-law forwarded me an interesting article on the toxicity of many of the romances depicted in YA novels and it got me thinking about how writers tackle the whole romance thing, especially in an age where many protagonists (in mysteries, thrillers as well as YA) are often โbad boyโ (or โbad girlโ) heroes/anti-heroes.
The article in the Melbourne newspaper The Age (link here), is an interview with Kasey Edwards, an Australian writer, about the often abusive, stalkerish, and horrible relationships depicted in some YA novels (most notably, the Twilight series) where girls fall for the โbad boyโ who thinks โnoโ just means โtry harderโ when it comes to winning their affection. And itโs not just YA โ you have books like the Fifty Shades of Grey series which translate this behavior in a decidedly adult way where girls/women fall in love with someone who is more powerful, controlling and possibly abusive (I confess I havenโt read the Fifty Shades of Grey books so I canโt really comment!).
I do think there is a broader issue at play in terms of the way relationships and romances are depicted, irrespective of gender or genre. I know Iโve certainly fallen into the trap of creating emotionally distant male characters who donโt treat their female counterparts with the respect that I certainly would demand in real life. But then fiction isnโt real life and nice, kind, pleasant people donโt necessarily make the most compelling characters!โ
6. https://megdowell.com/2019/09/29/i-accidentally-created-an-alter-ego-to-help-me-stay-positive-about-my-writing-struggles/ โI can pretty much guarantee that exactly one person on this planet remembers my evil twin Greg, and that one person is โ yep, you guessed it โ me.
Back in 2009, I pretty much used this blog to not only talk about my writing life and provide some form of public accountability for myself, but also to โ and Iโm being completely open and honest here โ completely mess around and find my โvoiceโ as an aspiring writer.
This involved plenty of weird things, which you can still technically find here if you go all the way back to the beginning of this blog in the archives. (Iโm not sure if you actually can, but I can, and these posts are still very much public, and I am very much not ashamed of them.)
One of the very strange โ but surprisingly extremely effective โ products of this time in my blogging history was the creation of Greg.
Greg was my alter ego โ I called him my Evil Twin. Greg tended to show up, often in the middle of blog posts, and give negative, mean-spirited, or bad writing or life advice to anyone who happened to be reading. Sometimes he would even โpost on the blog without my permissionโ as what I thought at the time was an oh so clever way to showcase what not to think or believe about writing.โ
7. https://ryanlanz.com/2019/09/29/why-we-should-dare-to-write-terribly/ โEvery once in a while, youโll write something you wish you could erase. And hey, with just a few frustrated pinky jabs into your delete key, that wish is easily self-granted if itโs just you and your word processor. If youโve written something terrible and posted to social media, I canโt help you.
Thereโs nothing wrong with you if you think youโve written something awful. I mean it. Thereโs not. I do it all the time, and Iโm completely normal. Okay, Iโm not. But if everyone just admitted to being weird already, weird could become the new normal and we wouldnโt have to keep worrying about it so much.
Everyone, no matter how good you are at writing, writes terrible things. Iโm not talking about dark things, taboo things, or clichรฉ things. Terrible writing. Disappointing sentence structure, plots with holes, bad dialogue, any kind of bad writing. Thatโs what this post is about.
I donโt think itโs a terrible thing โฆ to write terribly. We should all dare to do it. Obviously, I have a few good reasons why.โ
Research & Some Fun Bits:
1. https://audreydriscoll.com/2019/09/29/a-little-discussion-spices-up-a-blog-post/ โ
2. https://johnwhowell.com/2019/09/29/views-of-the-neighborhood-heratege-wrap-up/
3. https://storyempirecom.wordpress.com/2019/09/30/wordpress-reader-lists/ โIn August, I began a more robust blogging schedule. For much of the past year, I pretty much neglected my blog โ posting only on rare occasions. I knew I needed to do something different, so I came up with an idea for a regular Monday post. One thing led to another and now I have categories for five days a week and so far have posted every weekday (save one) in August and September.
I have the bulk of Octoberโs posts scheduled as well as a few for November. With a full-time job, keeping up with a blog in addition to writing fiction is time-consuming. Add to that, I like to read and visit other bloggers. Not only do I want to support fellow authors, itโs a great way to form new friendships.
With my increased online activity, Iโve been looking at ways to save time and simplify life in general. One thing is to cut down on the number of emails I receive. (Donโt laugh, I have three email addressesโpersonal, one for my website, and another for my job.)โ
4. https://thestoryreadingapeblog.com/2019/09/30/reserved-monday-funnies-14/
5. https://writersinthestormblog.com/2019/10/get-a-clue-youve-got-to-stop-over-using-this-word/ โThanks for indulging me. And for finding today’s target word twice in the first sentence. “Get” and it’s multi-tense derivative “got” could be nominated for one of the words everyone, not just writers, uses loosely for coming into possession of.
You could probably list a dozen or more words describing how you can come into possession of something. Some, like “obtain,” are definitely too writerly to be used in general cases. “Acquire”โthink acquisitionโ works, but can have a somewhat negative connotation as to how you’ve acquired something.
“Procure” or “gain” can imply that others helped or that what you got was a for personal use that could be a bit shady. (Think of procuring a prostitute.) “Secure” shows the difficulty in getting something, while “attain” is usually reserved for a commendable, difficult goal.
Our job as writers is to find the right, the best, word for every description, every bit of dialogue, and every scene. As easy substitute for get or got doesn’t always work.โ
6. https://megdowell.com/2019/10/01/writers-your-day-job-doesnt-have-to-rule-your-life/ โYou might think it does. But it doesnโt.
Growing up, the vast majority of us were probably told that getting an education, finding a stable, well-paying job, and starting a family were the most important things we could do for ourselves.
Itโs not that these things donโt or canโt have value. The problem is that some people โ such as creative people who would rather tell stories on paper than climb the corporate ladder or whatever โ donโt always end up with a stable job they stick with for years on end.
When a full-time job becomes a โday jobโ โ something you do while the sun is up so you can afford to eat and stay warm in the winter and buy more books, you know, all the priorities โ there comes a point when you have to decide how much of your energy you can dedicate to that job and how much you have to reserve for your side projects.
You might genuinely care about your day job and want to do good work. There is no rule that says you canโt excel as an employee and work toward building a successful writing career when you clock out and go home.โ
7. https://amytruebloodauthor.com/dear-debut-author-how-to-survive-your-debut-year-as-an-introvert/ โDear Debut Author,
So youโre an introvert and you have a book coming outโDONโT PANIC! If youโre anything like me, youโre excited about launch parties and author signingsโbut youโre also TERRIFIED. That is quite all right. Iโm here to tell you How To Survive Your Debut Year As An Introvert.
(Caveat: I know that not all introverts are petrified at the idea of public speaking, or too self-conscious to be properly alive, or would literally rather sit in a dark closet and rock back and forth moaning softly instead of marching up to a bookseller and introducing themselves as an author. To you I say WOW GOOD FOR YOU I AM IN AWE TELL ME YOUR SECRETS. For the rest of you, I have compiled a hopefully helpful but definitely tongue-in-cheek list.)โ
Some Things More Serious:
1. https://scvincent.com/2019/09/29/rites-of-passage-going-deeper/ โWe had only a field to cross before we reached or final planned destination of the day. Doll Tor is a secluded little circle, now set within a wooded grove, a little off the beaten track. Following the unofficial addition of stones to the circle in the 90s, by well-meaning but misguided visitors, archaeologists carefully restored the site to its original layout, removing extraneous stones and it now looks much as it would have done when it was first built in the Bronze Age.
Thankfully, the site had been well documented. The circle is around twenty feet in diameter and consists of six standing stones which were once connected by drystone walling, traces of which still remain. The design reminded us of Barbrook II, though here the connecting walls take a back seat and may be missed by those concentrating on the standing stones. As we had seen at Nine Maidens, and on previous trips to Barbrook I, there is a cairn close to the circle, this time, though, instead of being at a small distance away, it is right beside it. Almost connected to it. Given the nature of the finds unearthed here, it could be seen perhaps as a mortuary templeโฆ or perhaps its purpose was to forge a strong connection with the ancestors.โ
4. https://www.thecreativepenn.com/2019/10/02/writing-tips-using-visual-inspiration-for-your-stories/ โWriting Tips: Using Visual Inspiration For Your Stories
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If you havenโt heard of a muse board, donโt worry, you are not alone. Todayโs guest blogger, Jill Hedgecock, developed the time-saving tool and her older daughter named it.
At some point, every writer has probably paused and wondered what the hair color of their antagonist is or perhaps the shape of the nose of an ancillary character.
What if instead of searching through files looking for a character profile or rifling back through chapters, all you had to do was look up? That is the just one example of the brilliance of creating a muse board.
So what exactly is this marvelous time-saving tool?
A muse board is a visual aid designed to create mood, inform plot, assist in character development, and inspire descriptive prose.โ
5. http://booksbywomen.org/writing-for-small-markets-gives-you-power/ โWhen you pitch your writing, or manuscripts, and youโre told โYouโre a niche market. Ethnic topics are a hard sell,โ donโt be discouraged. Do not feel like you are the small fish in a big pond. There is an advantage to being a writer in a niche market.
A niche market is a small but well-defined segment of the population requiring specific goods or services, according to business dictionaries. My skill-set is writing about Filipino food, culture, stories of personalities in America or abroad. And my niche market? Fans of Filipino food, and culture.
Determine your product or specialty.
Writing is my specialty. I was born and raised in the Philippines. I grew up in a rural town called Tarlac, 60+ miles from Manila. My father was a farmer and an agricultural businessman. He planted fruits and vegetables in our farm. He raised cattle, had a poultry and a piggery. My mother cooked daily meals with the vegetables and fruits my father harvested. As a child, I was brought to the farm and into the kitchen to learn my motherโs cooking.โ
6. https://www.suecoletta.com/23-physical-abnormalities-of-serial-killers/ โPart of my research for my true crime project includes reading studies about serial killersโboth male and female murderers, even though Iโm concentrating on the latterโand much of the information Iโve uncovered wonโt make it into the book. In one such study, Joel Norris PhD points to 23 physical abnormalities of serial killers.
To add validity to his research, Joel Norris includes case studies in his book, Serial Killers.
Although numerous expert opinions can vary, predicting whether someone will or will not take the plunge into serial killing isnโt a black-and-white issue. We need to consider numerous factors, such as psychological, neurological, environmental, social, frontal lobe/prefrontal cortex damage, and/or chemical imbalances in the brain.
Keep in mind, our actions arenโt defined by physicality alone. The following 23 physical abnormalities of serial killers are one small piece of a greater overall puzzle. The totality of which supports the foundation for the emergence of a multiple murderer.โ
7. https://robbiesinspiration.wordpress.com/2019/10/02/a-cake-to-top-them-all-teddy-bears-picnic/
Teaser Fiction & Poetry:
1. https://phillipknightscott.com/2019/09/28/closet/
2. https://rachelpoli.com/2019/09/29/short-story-sunday-284-hook/
3. https://jenanita01.com/2019/09/29/on-delicate-wings/
4. https://erikakind.me/2019/09/30/daily-kind-quote-983/
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Book Reviews, Cover Reveals, & Author Interviews:
1. https://robbiesinspiration.wordpress.com/2019/09/29/bookreview-telling-sonny-by-elizabeth-gauffreau/ โForty-six-year-old FABY GAUTHIER keeps an abandoned family photograph album in her bottom bureau drawer. Also abandoned is a composition book of vaudeville show reviews, which she wrote when she was nineteen and Slim White, Americaโs self-proclaimed Favorite Hoofer (given name, LOUIS KITTELL), decided to take her along when he played the Small Time before thinking better of it four months later and sending her back home to Vermont on the train. Two weeks before the son she had with Louis is to be married, Faby learns that Louis has been killed in a single-car accident, an apparent suicide. Her first thought is that here is one more broken promise: Louis accepted SONNYโs invitation to the wedding readily, even enthusiastically, giving every assurance that he would be there, and now he wouldnโt be coming. An evenโ
3. https://teripolen.com/2019/10/01/badmoonrising-lv48-cassie-tam-files-3-by-matt-doyle-thriller-lgbt-paranormal/ โWelcome to the first day of Bad Moon Rising! If you love reading creepy, spine-tingling tales that make your heart race and have you looking over your shoulder, youโve come to the right place. A different indie author will be featured here every day throughout the month of October, so make sure to check back daily โ sharing is appreciated!
Although I havenโt gotten to this book yet (in spite of having a copy for several months), Iโve read the first two books in the Cassie Tam Files series, and Cassie is one intelligent, confident, and snarky protagonist. Trust me when I say she finds herself in some life-threatening situations. Welcome Matt Doyle!
Would you rather be abducted by aliens or a serial killer?โ
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9 responses to “Seven Links 10/5/19 Traci Kenworth”
Thank you for sharing again Traci.. very generous.. hugs
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Thank you for the link, Traci
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Thanks for sharing my posts here, Traci.
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You’re welcome, Robbie!
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Thank you very much for sharing the link, Traci!
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